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Cynder 15: Blue by *Razzek:iconRazzek:



15. Blue

His breathing is fast and shallow, the magic siphoning off him dancing over his skin in red arcs. It's lovely, almost like home.

"You deserve this, ice Guardian," Cynder says with glee, pacing around him. "Your friend, the yellow one, said some very incriminating things."

She's lying, of course. It's fun to goad these males, unravel them before leaving them to die in the elements. Really, what else is there to do for fun in this backwater jungle?

A tear rolls down Cyril's cheek and she can't help but smile.
©2008-2009 *Razzek
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Author's Comments

I actually made myself feel bad for Cyril here. Sure, he's an arrogant jerk, but that's just mean to do, even to him. Seems like something Dark Cynder would do, though. Inspired by the first sight we see of Cyril in the game, in which he looks really dead (I was surprised that both he and Volteer were right on their feet so quickly after their rescues).

Cynder 100 [link]

Cynder and Cyril belong to Universal.

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:iconscarabdynasty1:
I dunno why this one freaked me out, but it did, and that is actually kinda a good thing. You have a knack for th e 100 worder, youknow.
:iconrazzek:
Thank you. ^_^ I'm wondering if there isn't some way I can utilize my short fiction skills in my longer form work. :D
:iconignitus1992:
I didn't get this one O.o. What exactly did Cynder do to him?

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"Because I know you, and your heart would not allow it. Because I believe you are destined for great things... to bring about a new age... an age of peace... and I do not see what role destruction will have in that age." - Ignitus, speaking to Spyro.
:iconrazzek:
She's just taunting him and digging at old wounds without really meaning to (but enjoying the results). I actually was referencing your idea that Cyril and Volteer are pretty close, so Cyril is also crying because he's worried about his friend and because of their shared past.
:iconignitus1992:
OH! Wow, you're referencing what I had suggested :)? I guess you must've liked my idea of Cyril and Volteer being close :).
I think I should take the time to read all of your Cynder 100 thingies; they're damn good, I tell you o.o.
I was hoping that I'd be able to catch up, but... you have 21 out already, and I don't even have 1, so I guess I'll take my time :XD:.

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"Because I know you, and your heart would not allow it. Because I believe you are destined for great things... to bring about a new age... an age of peace... and I do not see what role destruction will have in that age." - Ignitus, speaking to Spyro.
:iconignitus1992:
Oh, and one thing I forgot; I feel sorry for Cyril in this one :(.

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"Because I know you, and your heart would not allow it. Because I believe you are destined for great things... to bring about a new age... an age of peace... and I do not see what role destruction will have in that age." - Ignitus, speaking to Spyro.
:iconscarabdynasty1:
There usually is. drabbles are usually about cutting down ideas into 100 words as well as just creating ones that are naturally short. Everything can be extended :)

I shall continue to feel sorry for cyril until I next see him make a snide remark:P
:iconrazzek:
Things like to lodge in my brain and reappear where they are most useful. :) I do like the idea of Cyril having friends, even if they can't really stand him in the present (Volteer: I find your pretentiousness and arrogance odious in the extreme, but you are right.).

Again, thank you very much. :) I have no faith in my own writing skills, so it means a lot when people tell me I don't actually suck at it. :D

Don't rush yourself. :) As with art, good writing takes some time.
:iconignitus1992:
Well, I think that even though Volteer said that, he doesn't hate Cyril; their fighting is just their weird way of showing that they're good friends, really.

OMG, I'm the same! I have no faith in my writing at all...

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"Because I know you, and your heart would not allow it. Because I believe you are destined for great things... to bring about a new age... an age of peace... and I do not see what role destruction will have in that age." - Ignitus, speaking to Spyro.

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